Thursday, October 30, 2014

The Warren Trading Post Caper

How about another short story today? Unlike last week’s story, this one is a contemporary tale told in two parts.
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THE WARREN TRADING POST CAPER
Blue skies. Gently rolling terrain. Purple mountains in the distance. Sounds like paradise, right? Not when a merciless sun boils tar right out of the pavement. I passed an endless stream of road kill, one a rattlesnake that appeared to have become mired in the goo and died out of desperation. I felt like that reptile as my tires struggled free of oozing oil with each turn of the wheels. The air conditioner in my Camaro struggled to keep the temperature at an acceptable level even though it was only eight in the morning.
My race across this desert terrain had started with a telephone call at five o’clock this morning. Marlene’s voice had sounded desperate. Frantic, actually. I couldn’t quite make out what the problem was before the uncertain connection was broken, and I was left to stare into a dead telephone. She had called from the little store her parents, Mike and Evelyn Warren, left her following their tragic automobile accident last year.
I had encouraged her to sell the establishment, but she had been raised in that trading post out in the middle of the western New Mexico desert. So sentimentalism triumphed over good sense. At least in my opinion. I worked full time for an engineering firm in Albuquerque and was only able to make the hundred-mile drive to Warren Trading Post on weekends. I had thought she would soon tired of the loneliness, but she seemed to thrive on it. And I had to admit our reunions every five days were something to look forward to. She was comfortable; I was frustrated.
I topped a rise on a surviving stretch of old Route 66 and spotted the trading post on the south side of the two-lane highway about a mile ahead. A pickup turned into the store as I watched. I tromped on the accelerator and managed to lurch into the parking area just as an Indian I recognized as John Benchley, tried the door. It appeared to be locked. John, a friend of my wife’s since childhood, beat on the door and shouted for Marlene. He turned as I slammed on the brakes and jumped out of the car.
“Hi, Frank. You got any idea what’s going on? Marlene ain’t opened up yet.”
We both knew my wife never opened later than 7:00 a.m. in order to serve coffee and donuts to a few regular customers – most of them local area Navajos – on their way to work at the natural gas processing plant 20 miles to the south. “No idea, John. I got a frantic call at five o’clock, but we were cut off. I got here as fast as I could.”
I fumbled with my keys and managed to get the door open. As I entered calling for my wife, an ominous silence shouted back at me. Both of us came to an abrupt halt and gaped at the sight confronting us. A portion of the western wall of the trading post was gone. A hole the size of a small truck gave us a perfect view of the sand outside the building.
“Jesus! What the hell happened here?” John asked. “What could take out a three-foot adobe wall like that?”
“And where in the hell is my wife?”
I shouted her name as I ran through the store to the living quarters at the rear. After a thorough search of the entire premises, including the two small building behind the post, revealed no trace of Marlene, I discovered John searching the ground outside the wrecked wall.
“Whoever or whatever it was raked and swept the area clear. I can’t find nothing but a faint track over here where they got careless. Maybe a semi tire print, but maybe not. Damn, Frank, did you notice the big safe holding all the pawn goods is missing?”
“So is Marlene.” I paused a beat. “What do you mean, whatever?”
“There was doings out here last night.”
“What doings?”
John shrugged his shoulders. “Dunno. Lights. Things a man don’t look at too close.”
“What the hell does that mean?”
“Just saying …”
“I don’t have time for stories about witchcraft, man. Marlene's missing! I’m gonna call in the County Mounties.”

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To be continued. What do you think? Witchcraft? New Mexico's "Alien" country, you know. Time will tell. Hope it’s been interesting enough to draw you back next week.

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Thursday, October 23, 2014

Let’s Do Another Short Story: POW

Today's story is longer than usual (and I’m told my posts are too lengthy, anyway), but I hope you’ll stick with me through the entire tale, which takes us back to the terrible days of World War II. It’s called POW:
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A steel door banged somewhere in the bowels of the Schloss. Private Max Hackler shuddered. They were coming for him. Fighting a wave of terror, he gripped the frame of the iron bunk bolted into the concrete wall of his cell. As the driver for an important general, he would be suspected of having vital information. How could he convince them the Old Man had plucked him out of an infantry platoon and made him a substitute driver less than a week before he was ambushed on a minor personal errand for his new boss?
Hackler had been whisked to a farmhouse where he was roughly questioned by a heavy-handed sergeant before being trundled off to this forbidding old Rhine castle and locked into a dank, cold cell. Since then, he’d been ignored except for an occasional food tray delivered through a slot in the rusted, iron door.
The sound of heavy boots halted outside his cell. He stood, squared his shoulders, and sought to stop trembling. A sergeant entered and beckoned him outside where a squad of four men conducted him up long, curving flights of stone steps to a carpeted marble hallway. The cold, moist atmosphere turned pleasantly warm and dry. The detail halted before a carved oak door that was likely ten times older than Hackler’s twenty years.
Inside a large, airy office, he was shoved into an antique chair and left alone in the room. Hackler lurched to his feet and scrambled to a casement window that in another age had probably served as an archer’s slot. To his dismay, the walls fell in a sheer drop of at least fifty feet.
“Quite a jump,” a deep, commanding voice said in Hackler’s own tongue. Startled, he whirled to find an officer had entered the room from a side door. “Not one you’d survive, I’m afraid.”
Drawing to attention, he regarded the man. Crisp uniform. Spit-shined boots. Ramrod posture. Handsome. Athletic. If he understood the foreign insignia correctly, this man was a major.
Without the slightest accent, the Major ordered him into a chair in front of a broad desk. “My name is Luebke. Major Karl Luebke. You may address me as Major or Sir. Understood?” He paused while Hackler gave a nervous nod.
Luebke took a seat and examined a thin folder on the desk. “You are Pvt. Max A. Hackler. I understand that you are the driver for a very important commander. Correct?”
Hackler responded with name, rank, and serial number.
Luebke waved his hand. “Come now, let’s dispense with that nonsense. What harm is there in admitting that you drive for a general officer? After all, you were captured in his personal vehicle. Am I to believe you stole it?”
“No, sir, I was just going on an errand.”
His interrogator’s half-smile alerted him to his mistake.
They verbally jousted over the errand and his duties until the officer brought his hand down sharply on the desk. Hackler jumped an inch off the creaky chair. Instantly, Luebke leaned back and drew a long cigarette from a silver case. “May I offer you one?”
Determined to make no more blunders, Hackler shook his head.
“Very well. I am sure you have heard a thousand horror stories about what happens to prisoners of war. Some of them are true, but while you are here at the Schloss, there will be no such unpleasantness. Provided you are of some use to me. You must justify my keeping you out of a POW camp. Admit to me that you are his driver, and that will suffice for the moment.”
To his eternal shame, Hackler nodded his head.
“Good. You will be returned to your room and fed.”
He nodded again and rose as the door behind him opened. The detail hustled him back into the dark dungeon of the massive stone fortress where the walls glistened with icy moisture. Huddling on the bunk beneath a thin woolen blanket, he mulled over his interview with Major Luebke.
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The next day, a sergeant – a man called Goetz – and a corporal came for him. Instead of turning toward the stairwell, they dragged him into a room at the end of the dark, musty corridor. His heart almost failed when he saw what it contained. He could put no name to most of the contraptions, but they were undoubtedly instruments of torture. This couldn’t be! The major had promised.
“Strip!” Goetz ordered, shoving him inside. His knees buckled, dumping him against a metal mummy. A sharp edge tore into his forearm painfully. Blood quickly soaked his sleeve. The pain revived him, reminded him he was a man. Fuck ‘em! Let them do their worst.
Hackler lost some of his bravado when he stood naked and shivering on the cold stone floor. His heart pumped too fast, leaving him giddy. Goetz walked a circle around him, inspecting him like a side of beef at market before grabbing him and throwing him onto a table. A special kind of table. He had seen enough films to know the name of this diabolical contraption. The rack.
Arms and legs secured to shackles, his body jerked full length when the sergeant turned a wheel. The man paused when Hackler’s shoulder joints gave small pops. He was helpless but not unreasonably uncomfortable … yet. He swallowed audibly as Goetz’ appeared above him. Despite the chill, sweat popped out on his forehead and leaked from his exposed armpits. The air turned close from the stink of fear.
“I thought you might need to stretch a little.” The sergeant laughed at his own crude joke before turning serious. “I hear you been giving the Major a hard time. He asks you simple questions, and you give him attitude.” Unlike the Major, the NCO had a heavy accent. “No more, you understand? You answer him in a respectful tone, or you’ll be back here for some serious stretching. First the ligaments rip … and the muscles. Then the joints tear apart. Pop like busted balloons. The condition you come off this table is the way you’ll be for the rest of your miserable life.”
“The…the Major promised me this wouldn’t happen.” Hackler forced the words out, fearful his bladder would give way. Or worse yet, his bowels.
“He won’t find out nothing about it. You behave yourself, you don’t never see this place again. You don’t cooperate, and we’ll have a little session down here all by ourselves. You can scream your head off, and he’ll never hear you.”
A voice barked from the doorway. “Sergeant, what’s going on here?”
The two enlisted men snapped to attention.
“Just a little softening up, sir! No harm done.”
The Major came into view. He took a long moment to examine Hackler from head to toe and then indicated the cut on the prisoner’s arm “Who drew blood from this man?”
The sergeant’s voice held a sneer. “He fell against the Iron Maiden, sir.”
“Clean him up and take care of that cut. Then bring him to my office. Snap to it!”
Freed from the frightful machine, Hackler staggered off the table and turned away to dress. By the time he finished, the Major was gone.
“You lucked out this time, punk.” The sergeant sneered. “But next time ….”
An hour later, Goetz delivered him to the Major’s office on the third level of the castle. Hackler remembered reading the higher you go in a castle, the closer you are to the baron or lord or whatever. Where the hell that thought came from?
Luebke dismissed the sergeant and motioned Hackler to a chair. “Are you ready to cooperate?” he demanded. When Hackler began reciting his name, the Major slammed the desk and stood. “Enough! You are privileged to be held here in this intelligence headquarters. But you will remain only so long as you are of value to me. Is that understood?”
Hackler nodded and spread his hands helplessly. “But I don’t have any information. I only drove the General for a few days.”
“Private, you will let me judge what has value. And you will address me as sir.”
“Yes, sir.”
For an hour, Luebke asked questions while Hackler sat mute except for giving name, rank, and serial number. At last the officer lost patience.
“Very well, I gave you every opportunity. Sgt. Goetz will ship you to the nearest POW camp immediately. I happen to know that place. You will not do well there.” He raised his voice for the sergeant.
Goetz pulled him out of the office and shoved him down the hallway toward the narrow, winding stone stairs “Glad you was crazy enough to tell him to fuck off,” the man said. “Now I’ll get an hour alone with you. Just one hour, and I’ll know everything there is to know about you. Then I’ll send what’s left of your sorry ass to the camp where they’ll kill you slow.”
The non-com’s words turned Hackler’s guts to liquid. There was one thing he did know. Something he’d overheard by accident. Something the enemy could never learn about.
The Private struggled to pull himself into something approximating a proper military posture and tucked his chin. Then he marched resolutely down the hall, leaving the detail struggling to catch up. When he reached the stairs and looked down the steep well, he knew what he had to do. He drew a deep breath before pitching  headfirst down the long, steep flight of stone steps.
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Karl Luebke stepped out into the bright morning sunshine and pulled his greatcoat close about him. The previous night’s snow was rapidly melting. Soon winter would be hard upon them. The American major turned and gazed at the flag flying from a distant rampart of the old castle. The Stars and Stripes always stirred his blood.
Too bad about the German boy, but there would be an unending stream of Teutonic men for him and Sgt. Goetz to break before this terrible war ended.

*****

That’s it for this week. Hope you got something out of the story. Not a pretty one, but not all that unusual for the times, and a reminder that fear can take us in unexpected directions.

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Thursday, October 16, 2014

EITHER OR Results and Something for THE ZOZOBRA INCIDENT fans

Last week’s post, EITHER OR, brought lots of page views but not so many responses. Don’t be shy. There’s still time to send me your endings.

Those that I have received seemed split pretty evenly. Roughly half had the protagonist turn left as he (or she) exited the Dagwood Sandwich Shop to follow the bold brunette with ruby red lips and intense stare, while roughly the same number had the character turn right and follow the blond hunk with laughing eyes. But that’s not as revealing as it seems, because some decided the narrator was male and others that she was female. That made for some interesting combinations, leading me to believe you readers are a rather complicated lot.

Send me some more endings at dontravis21@gmail.com!

This week, let’s take a brief peek at THE ZOZOBRA INCIDENT, which introduces Albuquerque Confidential Investigator, B. J. Vinson to readers, and hopefully makes fans of them all. In the following scene at the beginning of Chapter 12 (Page 113), BJ is frustrated by a rift with Paul Barton, a friendship he’s come to value. The break was caused by the fact Paul’s name keeps surfacing in the case, and BJ is eager to have the thing over and done with. He decides to revisit cashiered Marine Gunnery Sergeant Rory Tarleton, the man who printed copies of the racy photographs for Emilio Prada.


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     After a miserable night, I got up on the wrong side of grouchy, feeling empty, yet unable to face breakfast. I hungered for one of the Denver omelets Paul made so well. I wanted to watch him wake up. Talk to him. Laugh with him. Let him ask a thousand who-what-why questions about my life. I wanted him.
     Moving as if I were underwater, I forced myself into the shower and mindlessly went about the routine of cleaning up. I needed to get some things done, but in deference to the fact I wasn’t fit for human contact, I steered clear of the office and started retracing my steps.
     While picking up a single-use camera at the nearest drug store, I went surly with the clerk and was immediately contrite. My problems were not hers; doubtless she had enough of her own. I crawled back into the car and snapped twenty-four random shots on the way to the South Valley.
     Rory Tarleton’s homestead was considerably tidier than on my first visit. No one answered my knock, and there was no sign of him in the darkroom at the rear of the place. I was just slipping back into the Impala when the roar of an engine caught my attention. Rory rolled down the road on a US Military Indian Motorcycle, complete with sidecar, and parked in the drive beside the old Toyota up on blocks. The antique motor stroked smoothly, a testament to his mechanical skills.
     “You again,” he groused. “What you want this time?”
     “What the fuck’s wrong with you?” I snarled. Then groping for an attitude change, I sighed and glanced around. “Looks like I did you a favor. The place looks a thousand percent better. Now if you’ll only get rid of that junker-car, the joint will look decent.”
     “No way. That Toyota’ll run like a top when I get through. I’ll double my money on it.”
     “Like you will with the bike? It’s new, isn’t it?” It wasn’t new, of course. It was probably a leftover from WWII.
     He puffed up a little, and I figured that was as much pride as he would allow to show. “Yeah, just picked it up a few days ago. Didn’t take much work to get it purring. Whadda you want, anyway?”
     I held out my camera. “The same deal you made Emilio. By the way, have you heard from him?”
     He shook his head. “Not since them pictures. Same deal? Okay, for fifty bucks I develop, print, and forget them. I’ll let you know when they’re ready.”
     “Nope. I’m gonna watch you work. Just like Emilio did.”
     He shrugged, jiggling his beer belly. “Whatever. But I get paid up front.”
     “No problem.” I peeled off some bills Del would eventually replace.
     The next hour was devoted to staying out of Tarleton’s way in the cramped little shack behind the house. Even by the muted glare of the hazy red light he’d snapped on, I could see he wasn’t duplicating the negatives—if such a thing was even possible.
     Tarleton was giving me funny glances by the time he draped the last print over an old-fashioned heat drum. He flipped on a sixty-watt bulb as the first photos peeled off the drier. Grabbing the first three, he shuffled through them before facing me with a bayonet in his hand.
     “What the fuck’s going on, Vinson?”
     “What do you mean?”
     “Them pictures ain’t nothing. You coulda gone anywheres and got them done for ten bucks tops! How come you brought them here?”
     “Wanted to watch you work.”
     “You still looking for them dirties Emilio had?”
     I nodded. “Trying to trace them from development to the blackmailer.”
     He relaxed and buried the tip of the long bayonet in the wall beside his table. That was his stress reliever; the planking was pretty well splintered.
     “You lied to me—about one thing, anyway.”
     He wrapped his fist around the hilt of the knife. “About what?”
     “About the way Emilio paid for your skills. You got an administrative separation from the Corps, didn’t you? And here you had me fooled by that kiddy porn with little girls.”
     Anger suffused his heavy features, but he relaxed almost immediately. “Wasn’t fooling nobody. Sex is sex. ‘Sides, Emilio kinda looks like a girl if you squint your eyes. And he paid me the fifty, too—just like I said.” A foxy smile crawled across his lips. “So by rights, you still owe me.”
     “In your dreams, Tarleton.”
     He smirked. “That’s okay. Be kinda hard to take you for a girl. Besides, you’re too old for me.”
     “You like twinks, huh?”

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Our ex-gunnery sergeant is kind of a smarmy guy, huh? He’s just one of the gentler creatures BJ runs into while running a blackmailer-turned-killer to ground in ZOZOBRA.

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Thursday, October 9, 2014

WRITE YOUR OWN ENDING

Let’s have a little fun today. I’m going to start with a story opening, but I’ll take it just so far. You get to write your own ending. You can even send your ending to me at dontravis21@gmail.com, if you wish. So put those imaginations to work. Should you do it in a foreign language, please provide a translation.

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EITHER/OR

The Dagwood is a pretty good sandwich shop catering to impoverished students at the university. You know, decent food – and a lot of it – for reasonable prices. Its plain décor of whitewashed drywall and nicked Formica tables and booths is comfortable. You can get a conversation going or put up an invisible sign saying you’ve got cram for an English Lit test without any trouble. Traffic is always steady but not rushed except at lunch and dinner, then it’s a mad house.
This afternoon, I took my Dagwood Roast Beef on dark rye with three different cheeses and sweet red peppers to a corner table. No fries, and I had reluctantly declined the free chocolate chip cookie. It’s too easy to start packing on the weight, especially with a schedule that doesn’t allow for much exercise. Of course, I get some of that by walking the campus from end to end to meet my classes.
My best friends, Norman Pell and Maggie Shipton, had wanted me to go out for dinner at some uptown place, but I was pretty well ruled by my monthly budget, and Dagwood’s fit the bill. So I temporarily broke the mold of our triumvirate and asked them to go ahead without me. Besides, I was feeling a little out of sorts. Restless. Maybe craving something different. Let’s face it, I was horny. Not that I was going to find anything, but still …
I always cut my Dagwood sandwiches into small pieces in order to eat the gigantic things without looking gross. I finished that operation and was nibbling on a small wedge when I noticed a girl sitting alone at a table across the room. Girl … young woman, really. A brunette about my age with a heart-shaped face, fair skin, and wide eyes tastefully outlined with mascara. The irises were brown probably, although from this distance, I couldn’t tell. Generous lips on a rather small mouth.
She was staring at me, so I immediately named her Daisy in my mind and took the time to finish my inventory. Full bosom of the kind that showed cleavage. Her pantsuit was short enough to expose slender ankles, and shapely ankles do something to my libido. Open-toed pumps revealed scarlet toenails. My eyes automatically went to her hands. Long – but not overly long – fingernails so red they glistened in the fluorescent light.
I looked up to find her still watching me with a frank, appraising stare. My heart rate picked up. She smiled and leaned back in her chair, which thrust out her upper torso alluringly. Embarrassed, I went back to my sandwich. Whenever my eyes strayed, she was watching me. Should I go over and invite her to join me? Or just wait her out and see what happened?
I hadn’t made my mind up yet when I glanced up and saw a young man seated two tables to her right. His amused glance told me Brick – that was the name that popped into my mind – had caught the byplay between Daisy and me. I felt my face go red. The right side of his broad, sensual mouth ticked up in a lop-sided grin.
Brick’s hair was that indeterminate color between sandy and brown and curled around his ears in an engaging way. His face was more square than Daisy’s, definitely masculine. His eyes were slightly canted and obviously green. A hint of chest hair poked above his open collar. I dropped my gaze to below the table, and he obligingly spread his legs. My breath caught in my throat at the enticing way his jeans were packed.
I glanced back at Daisy and saw a puzzled frown on her face. In a moment, she’d catch onto the byplay, as well. But as I watched, she pushed away her plate, stood to smooth her slacks and take up her bag. Then with a long look at me, she walked past to push open the door. As she turned left, she let her eyes rake me one last time in an obvious invitation.
Movement brought my gaze back to Brick. He was on his feet, as well. Eyes boring into mine, he let his grin grow into a dazzling smile. Then he, too was through the door. He turned to the right.
Trying not to appear hurried, I abandoned my uneaten sandwich and pushed the café door open. After a moment’s hesitation, I turned …

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Okay, readers, it’s your turn. Which way did our protagonist turn, left after Daisy or right after Brick. And by the way, what was the narrator’s gender … male or female? Finish the story, and if you wish, share your ending with me.

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Thursday, October 2, 2014

A LITTLE EXCITEMENT FROM THE ZOZOBRA INCIDENT

I thought maybe we’d revisit THE ZOZOBRA INCIDENT this week. You know, I really like the cover on this book. That flaming, open hand picks up the theme of the Burning of Zozobra ritual at the Santa Fe Fiesta and throws it right back in your face. Martin Brown Publishers are good at cover art. That’s Sharene Martin Brown’s doing, I think. Not Robert, he’s a good publisher and great dancer, but cover art? Nah, that’s his wife’s thing. As a matter of record, I like the cover on THE BISTI BUSINESS just as well, possibly better.

But I digress (something I seldom do, you know). The following scene comes near the climax of the book in Chapter 27 (Page 259, as a matter of fact). During tense moments in the case, BJ has returned to his third-floor office in an old historic building at 5th and Tijeras NE across the street from the public library in downtown Albuquerque. He’s returned at night after being on a stakeout most of the day. You should know his building has an open middle atrium with offices around the perimeter, accessed by a landing with a sturdy brass rail.

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But it was the last message that really caught my attention. Mrs. Gertrude Wardlow, my plucky neighbor across the road, had noticed a suspicious car passing up and down the street two or three times earlier in the evening. She suggested I use “extreme caution” in returning home. What a wonderful old gal.
If this mess kept up much longer, my staid and stolid neighbors would ask me to move. On second thought, most of them hadn’t had this much excitement in ages. Safe, or presumed safe, behind their windows and drapes, the old geezers probably scanned the street every night before going to bed to check on that “private investigator fellow” down the street.
Resisting the temptation to sack out on my office couch, I got up, stretched, and started to leave. An indistinct noise from the landing—a footfall, a shoulder brushing against the wall, something—stayed my hand on the doorknob. The door was a solid plank of heavy oak, but a panel of frosted glass to the left darkened momentarily as a shadow passed across it. After five minutes of inaction, I cautiously cracked the door. A quick look up and down the landing revealed nothing alarming. If anyone was on this floor, he wasn’t visible, but a side hall leading to the restrooms lay between the elevators and me. Was someone crouching in ambush there? I stepped out onto the landing, locked the door, and tugged the peashooter from my belt. I turned away from the elevators and made for the stairwell.
I did not hear my assailant’s sneaker on the carpet until it was too late to face him, so I dropped to all fours. He tripped over my legs and fell with his body sprawled halfway across mine. Before he had time to recover, I gained my feet and sagged against the metal banister at the outer edge of the landing. Clinging to my back, he came up with me, flailing with a knife. When the blade ripped into my right biceps, I panicked, twisting away from the hand with the blade and straightening my back to throw him off of me.
Time switched to slow motion. The man clawed at my shirt for a moment. Then his center of gravity shifted. He slid over the railing. I clutched at his legs but couldn’t hold on. He fell with a terrified scream. I leaned over the railing and watched him flip on his back during the forty-foot drop to the hard, polished tiles below. He landed with a terrible suddenness and a sickening thud. A dark corona haloed his head. The blood and the clatter of his knife across the baked clay squares, kick-started my brain and released my frozen muscles.

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Hope you enjoyed the read. I also hope it grabbed you by the neck and demanded you order a copy of the book. Except for the famous ones, authors are always poor and starving. At any rate, that’s it until next week – same time, same place.

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